Note To Roommate Stanford Essay

Bottom Line
Most people don't know that the college admissions experience offers students and parents many opportunities for having a little fun. Reading about different schools in college guidebooks such as The Fiske Guide and Colleges That Change Lives can be very entertaining (as well as useful). Having a look at colleges at the likes of and is a kick. Visiting colleges can be a totally enjoyable experience for budding college applicants, parents and, sometimes, younger siblings. Even writing a college essay can be fun.

"What?" you say, "Writing an essay is fun? Get real!" Okay, many students find answering essay questions the worst part of the application process. But if you write about something you care about and dare to be yourself, or perhaps use a bit of irony or "tongue in cheek," you might just end up having a good time.

Let's Have Some Fun Right Now
Over the years, Stanford University has asked applicants to answer some variation of a "Letter to your future roommate" essay question, e.g., "Virtually all of Stanford's undergraduates live on campus. Write a note to your future roommate that reveals something about you or that will help your roommate -- and us -- know you better."

Here is what one bushy-tailed student wrote:



l. Kidnapped your best friend at 3:00 a.m. with a bunch of buddies and taken him/her for an emergency milkshake run?

2. Made snow angels in the nude on the school ski trip when it's 0 degrees outside?

3. Told tourists that if they "pee in the ocean," they'll attract great white sharks?

4. Re-enacted Monty Python and the Holy Grail in its entirety before your history class?

5. Taken apart your broken MP3 because you are sure that you can fix it?

6. In the middle of the summer, dressed up in all of your ski clothes, gone to the nearest 7-Eleven to buy ice blocks and joined your friends to slide down the nearest grassy hill, all the while complaining how cold it is?


l. Memorized the first half of Whitman's Song of Myself, because there was nothing better to do?

2. Spent three days arguing with your friends about the socio-political ramifications of the word "Chick?"

3. Stayed up until 5:00 a.m. because the conclusion of your English paper just wasn't right?

4. Received a parking ticket because you had to respond to a piece of racist graffiti in a public bathroom?

5. Spent the entire day at a cafe re-reading a book by your favorite author?

6. When you were a second grader, explained to a classmate's mother why you thought screaming at her kid was inappropriate while she threatened to spank you for being so insolent--


So if this isn't fun, I don't know what is. But there's more to it than you might think.

Application essays should allow people reading them know who you are by what you say.
What does this essay say about the student?

The Different "Messages" In The Essay
First and most obviously, the writer has a great sense of humor. College admissions readers love when you put smiles on their faces. Second, it says he's fun loving (the milkshake run) and also refreshingly audacious in his own twisted way (telling tourists that if they pee in the ocean, they'll attract great white sharks). Third, the student is curious (took apart his MP3). Admissions people look for inquisitiveness, resourcefulness, and students who are dying to learn. Fourth, he's a reader (his reference to Whitman's Song of Myself and re-reading a favorite book). Reading is a big deal in college. Fifth, he's a hard worker and wants to do things "better than very good" (making sure the conclusion of an English paper was just right). Sixth, he has a sense of social responsibility (responded to a piece of racist graffiti) and is also willing to stand up for other people (confronting his friend's mother about screaming at her kid). Finally, most people would think that the student is pretty smart. As you read it, what messages did you get?

Oh, yeah: The kid got into Stanford.

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Dear roommate… 

Dear roommate,

You might want to be aware of some things before we enter into this domestic relationship with one another.

I like my music loud. There may be a volume limit when my mom is home, but I am guessing she will not be coming to college with me. So I hope you’re up for blasting some Daft Punk. That’s another thing. . . if you were to ask me what my favorite kind of music is, I don’t think I could give you a concrete answer. I have over ten days worth of music on my iPod at the moment, and I have listened to every song at least once. I like to listen to music with meaningful words, not-so-meaningful words, music with words in other languages, and music with no words at all. That might respectively include artists such as Lupe Fiasco, Justin Bieber, Enrique Iglesias and the soundtrack to the Star Wars Saga. Basically, whatever music you’re into, I’ll give it a listen, unless of course you don’t enjoy music at all, in which case, we are going to have some problems.

Musical interest aside, I would say that I am a fairly simple guy. I like wearing a t-shirt and shorts and I enjoy walking around in flip-flops. I love swimming when it’s hot outside and lying under the covers watching an episode of The Office on my laptop when it’s raining.

However, I hate being bored. I always have to do something. And whatever I do, I intend to do to the very best of my ability. So if you were to ask me what my hobbies are, I would give you a long list. I am a competitive swimmer, I love acting in plays and musicals, I have a passion for service and helping others and, while I may not be very good, I like video games too. Living my entire life in southern Africa has allowed me to pursue all these interests.

Please don’t ever ask me where I’m from because I will give you a long and drawn-out answer. I am a citizen of the United States of America; however, I have only lived in the nation for the two months following my birth. And so, even though my skin may be slightly pigmentally challenged, I like to think of myself as a white African American.

I love my life and I love where I live. There was a short time when I was considering not going to college in the States. But my parents’ words to me were, “You need to live in America for at least four years before you decide you don’t want to live there.” And while the United States has always been more of a vacation destination for me thus far, I can’t wait to start this next chapter of my life.

See you soon … hopefully.




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